tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-179578171087137267.post5897119130179543157..comments2022-11-07T05:55:10.574-05:00Comments on ZA's Writings: LifeOphelia - Marie Flowershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00205089836253323416noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-179578171087137267.post-34364969995797668962012-02-09T18:54:43.116-05:002012-02-09T18:54:43.116-05:00Thank you, Mike. :DThank you, Mike. :DOphelia - Marie Flowershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00205089836253323416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-179578171087137267.post-6429939321712131312012-02-08T22:44:53.586-05:002012-02-08T22:44:53.586-05:00Very nice, and beautiful imagery. You mastered the...Very nice, and beautiful imagery. You mastered the words quite well throughout. Excellent work.mikew116https://www.blogger.com/profile/15904946581928823933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-179578171087137267.post-80042931627086872542012-02-07T19:35:27.451-05:002012-02-07T19:35:27.451-05:00Hi, Kalistia. =) :D I'm glad you like this poe...Hi, Kalistia. =) :D I'm glad you like this poem; thank you for commenting! <br /><br />That line about the future was one of the easiest to come up with, because that is how I picture it at times. . . Though, of course, God's hope and peace lies within the future as well. :D *Half rambles* <br /><br />*Grins* :)<br /><br />~ZAOphelia - Marie Flowershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00205089836253323416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-179578171087137267.post-16567535442253914802012-02-07T19:24:17.665-05:002012-02-07T19:24:17.665-05:00Thank you for commenting on this poem, Andrew. I w...Thank you for commenting on this poem, Andrew. I wanted to ask your opinion the other day, since your blog post brought it about, but you had to go. :)<br /><br />I really enjoyed trying something new, and thinking about essence.I look forward to writing more poetry, whenever I find a topic that I want to express.<br /><br /><br /><br />~ZAOphelia - Marie Flowershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00205089836253323416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-179578171087137267.post-46268755556098560832012-02-07T14:29:28.725-05:002012-02-07T14:29:28.725-05:00Wow, that was wonderful. I loved it. =) One of ...Wow, that was wonderful. I loved it. =) One of my favorite parts was:<br /><br />"Future is a mountain high,<br />An ocean under midnight sky..."<br /><br />If I dwell upon the future, that is almost precisely the image I inevitably conjure up. Beautiful. =)Kalisia Silverwinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01002513592504848270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-179578171087137267.post-29100455153352010432012-02-07T09:37:42.557-05:002012-02-07T09:37:42.557-05:00I love this! You have nailed the idea, I think =) ...I love this! You have nailed the idea, I think =) The metaphors, particularly on the "Past," "Present," and "Future" stanzas, nail the emotion in just a few short lines. Awesome stuff! <br /><br />Looking forward to reading more poems =)<br /><br />Andrewasdfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01316467884850300896noreply@blogger.com